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FanFic Title: World Gate Online
Chapter 2: Chance Meeting
Author: imaginexbreaker
Date Published: December 19th, 2014


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Chapter 2: Chance Meeting


First, let’s talk about the skill tree.

A skill tree is a set of skills you can have on certain jobs. You allocate [Skill Points] in order to unlock skills that are present in the skill tree.

When choosing a job, there are certain skills that are automatically achieved. However, they’re not part of the skill tree.

Skill trees can be gained from a [Skill Tree Book], where some are sold, some are found deep in the dungeons. There are [Skill Tree Books] for basic skills for certain jobs that are sold cheap since it can be massed produced.

Advanced or higher skill trees however, cannot be massed produced and are very pricey, also, most of these are usually the ones found in a dungeon. They have better and more efficient skills so if the player wants to be strong, having one of this is a must.

Of course, there are skills that you can obtain through a separate one which is called [Skill Scroll], it does not need any [Skill Point] in order to unlock, one just has to accomplish the requirements and they will be able to use the skill.

Now, Lucas, who has been stuck inside the cave, has no skill tree. Since getting the [Wanderer] job, Lucas needs to get skill trees from other jobs so that his job will be of use.

“Haah…well, I guess I’m grateful for it since I won’t have to trouble myself in searching for [Skill Tree Books] for this job.”

Since his is a hidden job, there isn’t likely for there be any [Skill Tree Book] that can be bought in a city. He needs to find his in a dungeon somewhere in this vast world. And that would be a serious pain to do so he was really grateful for the effect.

Anyway, he still needs money. So he went to the local Merchant Guild to exchange his loots from the cave.

“Excuse me, how much can you give me with these?”

“Ah yes welcome, please wait for a moment for me to check the goods.”

The merchant took on a business smile and took the loots from Lucas. Then, he revealed a shocked expression all of a sudden.

After seeing his expression, Lucas finally understood why and can only blame himself from not noticing.

What he gave was loots from [Dracula Bat], [Crypt Owl], [Alpha Grey Wolf], [Eye Bat] and several equipments and items from the demi-vampires they captured.

Meaning, unique monsters that were only seen on a certain popular movie.

Yes, the one Lucas was in.

“Y-y-y-you’re tha- mngf-!?”

It seems that the merchant wasn’t an NPC, but a player that has watched the movie so he quickly shut his mouth by blocking it with his hand.

“Listen up. After this transaction, you didn’t see or hear me. Also, if you trick me with the price, you’re dead.”

Lucas said this in a deep cold voice and slightly activated his [Dragon’s Wrath] which only showed a bit of black aura since the [Rage] stat wasn’t high.

The merchant immediately nodded as he figured out that he’s the real deal.

Confirming the merchant’s nodding, Lucas let go of the hand and quietly waited to get his money.

“E-err, this loots are actually very rare, since they are the first loot from an undiscovered…well, recently discovered monsters, coupled with the fact that they’re from the actual loots from [The White Haired Adventurer]-!...sorry, I’m seriously excited right now.”

The merchant’s tone was getting more and more excited as he explained.

To this, Lucas can only smile wryly again, he no longer knows just how many times he’s made that face already.

“A-anyway, I think you’ll be able to get more money if you put them in auction.”

“Really? But…I don’t really want to stand out too much…”

That’s the point, Lucas no longer wanted to stand out and if possible, they won’t learn of his name.

“Believe me, you already stood out plenty.”

“Not like you recognized me with the hood on though.”

“Now that you mentioned it, where did you get that outfit?”

Well, his outfit isn’t shown in the movie so of course he wouldn’t know. Just then, Lucas got an idea.

“If you place these items on auction on your name, then I don’t mind telling you, plus, answer some of your questions?”

“S-seriously!? Oh wow, sure! Sure man!...I do get a percent in this don’t I?”

Looks like he’s still a merchant to the end.

Lucas sighed thinking he could’ve fooled him into using him without any payment.

“…10%”

“40%”

“20%”

“30% no more, no less.”

Lucas sighed once more.

“Looks like I can’t haggle any further.”

Thinking that, Lucas gave in and nodded.

“Alright, also, just include the equipments, as for the loots, please exchange them to money immediately.”

“Hm? Well, alright. Here, 10G and 50S. I think that’s worth all of these rare loots.”

“Hn, I guess that’s reasonable. I’ll leave the equipment here, set the auction to end by the end of the day. I still have things to do.”

Just when Lucas was about to leave the guild, the merchant once again called back.

“Wait, how about my question?”

“Ah yes, this outfit is called [The Nocturnal], one of the rewards from the Dragon Quest. As for your other questions, I’ll answer them after the auction, for now…”

Lucas turned back and displayed a slight smile.

“Let’s be friends?”

With it came a friend request to the merchant.

Since Lucas will most likely be kept on the spotlight, it would be nice to have a merchant where he can entrust the loots he gained. This way, he shouldn’t be known when selling the unique loots to other.

“I’ll just have to make him do all the work.”

A sinister smile can be seen behind the friendly smile on the surface.

“I-it will be my pleasure!”

The merchant readily accepted the request.

It would seem that the merchant’s name is Noir.

“Lucas…so that’s your name?”

“Yep, now, I still need to go buy some [Skill Tree Books]. Later Noir.”

When Lucas left the building, Noir wondered.

“…Does he mean that he still has no skill tree?”

+ + +

[“I knew it, you really are popular. Just what did you do Lucas?”]

“Quiet you. I also didn’t expect it to be this severe…”

Lucas is currently inside the swordsman center where players can choose the job [Swordsman] and where [Swordsman Skill Tree Books] are sold.

What he bought was a [Basic Swordsmanship Skill Tree Book] as well as [Basic Sword Skill Tree Book], [Basic One-handed Skill Tree Book] and [Basic Two-handed Skill Tree Book] which cost 1S, 5S, 5S, and 5S respectively.

Lucas decided to leave allocating points until later and moves on to another place.

Like that, he went and bought all kinds of [Skill Tree Books].

For Magician related: [Basic Magic Skill Tree Book], [Basic Fire Magic Skill Tree Book], [Basic Water Magic Skill Tree Book], [Basic Earth Magic Skill Tree Book], [Basic Wind Magic Skill Tree Book], [Basic Light Magic Skill Tree Book], [Basic Dark Magic Skill Tree Book]

For Warrior related: [Basic Warrior Skill Tree Book], [Basic Axe Skill Tree Book], [Basic Warhammer Skill Tree Book], [Basic Mace Skill Tree Book], [Basic Spear Skill Tree Book]

For Tamer related: [Basic Taming Skill Tree Book], [Basic Whip Skill Tree Book]

For Scout related: [Basic Scouting Skill Tree Book], [Basic Dagger Skill Tree Book], [Basic Katar Skill Tree Book]

For Cook related: [Basic Cooking Skill Tree Book]

For Brawler related: [Basic Brawling Skill Tree Book], [Basic Gauntlet Skill Tree Book]

For Marksman related: [Basic Marksman Skill Tree Book], [Basic Bow Skill Tree Book], [Basic Gun Skill Tree Book]

For Priest related: [Basic Priest Skill Tree Book], [Basic Staff Skill Tree Book]

For Vendor related: [Basic Vending Skill Tree Book]

For Blacksmith related: [Basic Blacksmithing Skill Tree Book]

For Tailor related: [Basic Tailoring Skill Tree Book]

For Stone Worker related: [Basic Stone Working Skill Tree Book]

For Wood Worker related: [Basic Wood Working Skill Tree Book]

For Alchemist related: [Basic Alchemy Skill Tree Book]

All in all costs 99S.

All that’s left is to check on the [Painter] job. By the way, there is still one left which Lucas didn’t pick, the [Bard] since he hate singing and dancing so he ignored it.

“Well, though a bit different, painting is basically the same as drawing so I’m really looking forward to this.”

Since in the real world, Lucas himself is a digital artist, he is interested whether his skills would improve in the real world if he practiced painting here in the game with the system’s assists.

Walking optimistically, Lucas went inside the painter center.

“…There’s isn’t a single person here…is this the right place?”

That’s right, aside from Lucas, there was no one in the building making it look like some kind of abandoned building.

Just when Lucas was wondering whether to go out to ask someone, a voice resounded from the counter.

“Hn? What, a customer? If you’re just here to window shop then leave already.”

As he said, job centers also functions as shops for items and equipments related to their job so for an unpopular job like a [Painter], most of the people that come here are only doing so either to look at the arts or buy them.

Actually, when he went to the [Stone Worker], [Wood Worker], and [Tailor], there were only few people that wanted to change their job into that. Probably because a [Stone Worker] can use its skills to make either a house or a weapon, [Wood Worker] can make a house as well and staffs, wands, or bow, [Tailor] makes clothes.

They all produce something that is needed. While a [Painter] only creates paintings making it a very unpopular choice. Coupled with the fact that it requires real skill and artistic sense, there’s basically probably only one in a million that would want it.

“About that, I’m looking for a painter’s skill tree book.”

When the person at the counter heard that, he immediately showed his face.

He looked like an old man with a beard that wasn’t trimmed and messy hair as well as a thin body. As if he hadn’t cared for his hygiene for years.

“Ohh, finally someone who want to be a painter! Wait just a moment! I’ll go get the skill tree book!”

“Y-yeah…”

A little dumbfounded by the person’s enthusiasm, Lucas looked around at the shop.

“Quite the works of art here…did he make all these?”

When he reached the end, he looked at the painting beside the counter.

For some reason, this painting stood out the most. It was just a simple painting of the setting sun in the beach. Yet it showed brilliance.

“Looks like you have a good eye at masterpieces eh?”

Just when Lucas was about to touch it, the clerk went back with his hands was a book.

“That there is a masterpiece of the Legendary Texture Painter, Serlor Asher.”

“Texture Painter?”

Legendary Texture Painter. Touch it and you’ll see.”

The clerk grinned as if anticipating Lucas’ reaction.

Lucas followed and stretched his index finger to touch the sand part of the beach painting.

“!? T-this is…sand!? Real sand!?”

As he said, when he touched the sand of the beach, he felt as if he touched real sand.

He next touched the water, sure enough, as he thought it would, he also felt the softness of the water yet was still hard.

A really weird filling, it was like the texture of the water was directly transferred to his brain even though he knew he was touching a solid object.

The light from the sun as well, warm yet cold, like the feeling of the sunlight when it was just about to set.

The sun too was hot, so hot that he inadvertently pulled back his hand.

“…How is it? A masterpiece is it not?”

“This…this is already past being a masterpiece!”

“Haha, I like you boy, how about it? You’re going to be a painter?”

Lucas wanted to be also able to paint textures like this, however, can an ordinary painter do this? It feels like one needs a hidden job for this.

“That look, haha, you wanted to be a [Texture Painter] as well huh?”

“S-so there is a job like that!?”

“Yep, but one must become a [Painter] first.”

A hidden 2nd Job!

“So not all hidden jobs start at the first huh? If it’s like this, then it’s alright to spend one of my job slots to being a [Painter]! [Wanderer] doesn’t accept hidden jobs anyway, so I’ll aim [Texture Painter] as my goal!”

Lucas thought of it calmly yet a bit excited first before casually accepting.

“Yes please, I want to be a [Painter]!”

Notice

You have been given a job [Painter]!

To be able to paint and decorate the houses of the nobles! You’re passion for art has lead you to becoming a [Painter]!

Notice

You have gained a new stat [Art Sense]!

+10 Art Sense

“Good good! Here, the skill tree book you wanted.”

Lucas obtained the [Basic Painting Skill Tree Book] from the clerk.

“Do you know how I can become a [Texture Painter]?”

“Hmm, If memory serves me right, then there should be one living in [Alsey], perhaps you can ask him. Though be careful, they say that if you didn’t have what it takes, he’d refuse to tell you in his lifetime. You can only ask him once.”

“So there’s a requirement huh? When it comes to this types, it would usually be the skill as a [Painter], in other words, I have to be already Lvl 100 [Painter], to be able to rank up.”

Lucas was confident of his answer as to how he would be judged, though still a bit hesitant, he just decided that he’ll max out all skills just in case.

“Where is [Alsey]?”

“In the central continent, [Cravon].”

Before Lucas left, he also bought different kinds of brushes, a sketchpad, paints, palette, and an easel which is commonly known as a canvas stand.

Now that he finally got all he needed. He started allocating [Skill Points] to unlock skills that he wanted.

+ + +

“W-what the hell…”

Pearce let out as he watched Lucas’ status with Lilianne and Trask.

“Now that he’s out of the cave, he’s gotten hold of himself [Skill Tree Books].”

“Are you kidding me!? Those numbers of skills aren’t for a Lvl1 1st job!!!”

Pearce retorted at Trask’s remark.

As for the reason of their debate, take a look at Lucas’ current status.

Name

Lucas

Level

1

Gender

Male

Money

10 G 54 S 50 C

Job

Wanderer LVL 1
Painter LVL 1

Race

Human

Health

740

Mana

650

STR

160

INT

110

SPD

145

DEX

110

VIT

128

LUK

217

Fame

1270

Charisma

1000

Art Sense

10

Rage

0

Fire

10

Water

10

Earth

10

Wind

10

Light

10

Dark

10

Passive Skills

      [Play Dead] Beginner LVL 5(25.87%)
      [Dragon Eyes] Beginner LVL 4(54.65%)
      [One Foot Walk] Beginner LVL 9 (12.35%)
      [Mouth Mastery] Beginner LVL 7 (28.11%)
      [Photographic Memory] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Art Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Potion Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Herb Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Wood Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Ore Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Cloth Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Metallurgy Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Item Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Ingredient Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Food Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Trap Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Enemy Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Magic Appraisal] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Staff Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Gun Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Bow Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Gauntlet Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Katar Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Dagger Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Whip Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Spear Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Mace Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Warhammer Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Axe Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Two-hand Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Dominant Arm Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Weak Arm Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Sword Mastery] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Warrior’s Presence] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)

Active Skills

      [Bash] Master LVL 10(100.00%)
      [Stomp] Master LVL 10(100.00%)
      [Dragon’s Wrath] Beginner LVL 3 (52.54%)
      [Dragon Claw] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Dragon Roar] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Color Picker] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Color Mix] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Fotiá] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Neró] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Gi̱] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Mien] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Fo̱s] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Skotádi] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Metallurgy Repair] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)
      [Cloth Repair] Beginner LVL 1 (0.00%)

Popularity

      Pure-blooded Vampires +1000

“Well…this is the result of reaching over 100 levels while in Novice, he’s basically already a 2nd job supposedly.”

“I can’t believe it…in the first place, why did he spent all those points on appraisal, mastery, and basic element skills!? And his other job is a [Painter]!? Of all the jobs!?“

“C-calm down you.”

Pearce was constantly nagging at how weird Lucas’ choice of skills and jobs is and was on the verge of flipping the table.

“Haha, well, let’s just see how this will turn out.”

Trask, as always, was laughing seemingly amused at Lucas.

“Well…I wonder how he’ll answer my question from before.”

He let out a sinister smile again in his mind.

“I’m really looking forward to it, [World Key Holder].”

+ + +

*chu-!?*

Lucas sneezed as he walked through the plaza.

[“Hm? Caught a cold?”]

“Nah…someone’s probably talking about me.”

[“?”]

Well of course he won’t get it. Anyway, as Lucas walked, he grew tired and sat by the plaza’s fountain and think about his skills.

The reason why he didn’t spend any points on attacks is because he didn’t need them right now. What he needs is the basics and things that are useful.

The attack skills are basically system assisted movements, if he can learn the sequence of movements, then he can unleash a self-move skill. Though, of course, he will lose the damage bonus of the skill, but that’s not important now in this early in the game.

Appraisal are very useful to him since he’s most likely going solo, that’s why he needed abilities that will support him.

As for the basic magic skills, they were the same as the ones he used in the tutorial at the start. Unlocking them also unlocks their respective elemental stats, which is why he unlocked them first. They are also the root of all spells, mastering them is equivalent to mastering their respective elements. Though all they can do is make the element appear on the fingertip, you can also control them to change shape unlike other spells.

As he was thinking of such things, he noticed a commotion in the plaza.

“Catch that slave!”

Every player in the plaza looked towards the direction of the voice.

There, a city guard was chasing a hooded figure.

“Whoever catches that slave will earn a reward from his majesty! Quickly capture her!”

Escaped Slave

By the order of a city guard, capture the escaped slave and shall be rewarded by the king himself!

Note that everyone involved will also receive a consolation prize different from the captor who will be personally rewarded.

Requirement: Capture the escaped slave
Difficulty: E
Reward: ???

“Uwoooo! An event! It’s an event quest!”

“Hey, it says here that even by participating, you’ll be rewarded!”

“Haha, Screw you! I will be the one to capture that bitch!”

All kinds of cheers rang around Lucas who was still calmly sitting at the bench by the fountain.

“Haah, what idiots.”

[“Hn? You’re not participating.”]

Lucas ignored the Warren and the quest window by relaxing even more on the bench.

Until…the slave ran in front of him.

Lucas was mesmerized. Under that hood, he saw a very familiar silver hair and snow white cheek.

One player had already brandished his sword and was about to cut the slave.

There was no moment to lose.

Lucas took out [Draughtbane] from his inventory and abruptly stoop up and repelled that sword.

“W-wha-!? What do you think you’re doing huh!?”

Not just the player that attacked the slave, but everyone in the plaza was surprised and didn’t move, including the city guard from before.

Lucas ignored them all and casually pulled out his hood and faced them all as he snap his heck and brandish his sword. To which, shocked every player even more.

“W-who…are you?...”

This time, a sweet voice was heard from behind him.

It was the slave’s.

To this, Lucas revealed a challenging smile.

“Just wait for a moment princess, I’ll take you to your father soon.”

Lucas and Slave

Author's Notes


Finally finished....well, I finished this...about 3-4 days ago? But since it was too early, I decided to post the illustration at the same time...which I just finished last night -_-

Ughhh, I suck at coloring OTL shadowing is all over the place....well, whatever. I even closed one eye since I was too lazy to draw the other eye haha :p

You also got the first look at Lucas' new equipment (Though I probably suck but meh -_-)

If Lucas' posture seems familiar to some of you, that's because I used an illustration in To aru Majutsu no Index NT as reference :p

Anyway, the two finally meet!

Plus, Lucas finally got a hold of actual skills aside from his weird skills!

As for the jobs, I'm gonna explain them as I go, meaning, when it is needed -3- the skills as well.

Otherwise, this will turn into a boring explanation chapter so spare me from that -_-

And yes, I know it now looks like the Legendary Moonlight Sculptor but I really want Lucas to be a painter, and in LMS, the little sis of the MC is an Aqualight(?) Painter or something and Lucas here is a TEXTURE Painter! Painting actual textures! This will be really important later on especially when he meets a certain friend (his name not yet mentioned) so :P

Anyway...I feel like I keep saying 'anyway'...well whatever. Anyway, Lucas ignored the quest! Will this be a premonition of something bigger? Or will it not?

What was the meaning behind Trask's words?

And how will the two cope with this situation they are in?

Till the next chapter! :P


Illustrator: imaginexbreaker
Reference: http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/images/7/7f/NT_Index_v09_322-323.jpg


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Comments (28)

  1. h2h1z
    December 19th, 2014 at 01:59:45 AM

    I feel you could have said till next time on Dragon Ball Z but to each his (or her) own. I think you did well with the picture (Way better than anything I could make). If you need help with skills just ask I’m sure everyone can share some commonly mentioned skill and even a few you might not have thought of other.

  2. BaoT2001
    December 19th, 2014 at 02:06:05 AM

    Thank for the chapter. And also, really good job, hope to see the next chapter soon, anyway, I wait for the new update impatiently as alway 🙂
    And the mc finally meet the heroine(?), also, does his world key thingy let him take someone with him to the other world? I forgot about that.

  3. BaoT2001
    December 19th, 2014 at 02:12:46 AM

    Yeah, I completely agree with h2h1z if you ever need help to come up with skills and stuff like that, just ask, don’t hesitate.
    Oh yeah, I forgot to say this but, Lucas look like the main character in the light novel/manga 1/2 prince. Even his weapon kinda remind me of that too, you probably did that unintentional thought

  4. imaginexbreaker
    December 19th, 2014 at 02:16:54 AM

    haha thank you, about taking somone to the other world, fufufu, just wait. Also, I read 1/2 prince but I really didn’t intend to make Lucas look like him(her), in fact, I already forgot how he looks like :p

  5. koog008
    December 19th, 2014 at 02:47:52 AM

    ughh.. i am so disappointed.. why did he get all those weapon mastery.. its not like hes gonna master all weapons.. unless thats your plan lol.. becuz thats just too far fetch.. his two main weapons are swords.. not sure if its dual wield or 2 handers.. but they are both high rank.. so hes gonna be using it for a while.. dont understand

  6. kreepers
    December 19th, 2014 at 03:05:05 AM

    he’s probably gonna use different weapons when he wants to keep a low profile

  7. toobadbro
    December 19th, 2014 at 03:29:44 AM

    hmm new title Vampire rescuer

  8. NP-3228
    December 19th, 2014 at 03:54:27 AM

    He has quite teh brain to draw up the connection so quickly based on only skin and hair color. Looks like he really like the vampire women in that cave. Don’t worry about the equipment he’s wearing in the illustration, you can use the excuse that he’s still a nooby starting out so his equips will naturally not look awesome. That said, it looks nice. You’ve improved a bit.

  9. crimsonbloodreaper
    December 19th, 2014 at 04:29:55 AM

    i love this. i’m looking forward to more 5/5 stars.

  10. imaginexbreaker
    December 19th, 2014 at 05:25:02 AM

    As for the weapon masteries, that’s just for convenience sake, as for using it to keep a low profile…well you’ll see :p

  11. Vaevicti
    December 19th, 2014 at 06:42:34 AM

    First, I would like to say good job to the Author/Illustrator. The art really pushes this story over the top.

    Second, it doesn’t even remotely look like 1/2 prince. That has a Chinese art style which I don’t think this resembles at all.

    Can’t wait for more!

  12. AncientKaiser
    December 19th, 2014 at 04:52:35 PM

    AK here!

    First of all I would like to thank you for your novel!

    It keeps me excited and on my toes!~

    You, Alzeroth and CrystalDemon are my favorite authors on this site!

    I just love your works!

    Anyways Thanks so much for writing this awesome story!~

    Love and Peace, AncientKaiser!~

  13. Ingro
    December 19th, 2014 at 11:47:09 PM

    That cliffhanger…

    Thank you for the chapter. I’m looking forward to seeing how the quest turns out for him.

  14. xatoatox
    December 20th, 2014 at 03:45:37 AM

    0oooooaaahhh!! is he gonna maary her???

  15. Treyon13
    December 23rd, 2014 at 05:06:02 AM

    SUP, lets see if i can comment now.

  16. Treyon13
    December 23rd, 2014 at 05:09:24 AM

    OHHH, k nice, wanted to tell you that i really liked your novel. I also wanted to tell you that how about making the vampires daywalkers or something? at least give them an item that allows them to walk under the sun =P. Also since the princess is a vampire then it should be night time there right? if not how come she dosnt turn to ashes xD???.

    Another thing. to comment i had to create an account, why is that lol?.

    Cheers! Fan from Chile in latin america!

  17. Treyon13
    December 23rd, 2014 at 05:13:50 AM

    OH!, also wanted to tell you that isnt it a bit to much that you gain 1 skill for mastering begginer, intermidiate and master? that means you get 3 skills points per skill you grind to master, making it a little to OP for all players, specially for lucas since he can use a lot of skill trees, lets say he maxed out what he has, he only needs to buy another skill tree and master the very first skill and he gets 3 more skill points.

    Its just my honest opinion but he should only get skill points once he rea

  18. imaginexbreaker
    December 23rd, 2014 at 05:38:06 AM

    haha, first of all, the vampire has that cloak hood thingy so she’s not directly hit by the sunlight

    also, not all skills in the skill tree is equivalent to 1 skill point. especially attack skills/magic costs at least 20 skill points. and mastering skills aren’t that easy as well

  19. Treyon13
    December 23rd, 2014 at 06:35:42 PM

    OH, well first of all can you clarify how much damage do the vampires in your story take from the sun?, there are extremes like if a vampire gets under the sun they will instantly die buring to ashes and others like the vampires skin will get burned like the humans do if they play the beach in a sunny day the whole day with only swimsuits, meaning its not really dangerous aside from the pain of having your skin red. In such a story the vampire resolved the sun problem using Sunscreen oil in her whole body.

  20. Treyon13
    December 23rd, 2014 at 06:37:34 PM

    This is the name of the manga im using as reference, here the heroine is a vampire and the protagonist is a human.

    JITSU WA WATASHI WA. You can read this in mangafox and the like

  21. imaginexbreaker
    December 23rd, 2014 at 07:14:18 PM

    well…I plan to use sunscreen as well actually, but that will still be long on the story so someday.
    also, how much damage to the skin? well, you can get the answer when she actually got damaged by it, probably in the next few chapters

  22. teenreader
    December 23rd, 2014 at 08:54:19 PM

    I like this… keep up the good work.
    He risked his celebrity status lol

  23. Treyon13
    December 24th, 2014 at 01:46:44 AM

    He risked his celebrity status? you’re kidding!!!, after this his status will go up a lot more… "White aired and red eyed adventurer rescued the princess of the vampires and even daring to go against the king wishes!!", Like nobody can stop ME!!.

    I was thinking on how he can escape the situation and thought that he can cast a fire ball in one hand, cast a water ball in the other hand, then fuse them to create a mist cover to escape, like a pro ninja with a smoke screen! XD. My imagination was

  24. imaginexbreaker
    December 24th, 2014 at 05:57:42 AM

    haha, lol that character count limit ^^^ it almost loked like japtem itself tried to shut him up for getting too excited….remided me of Noir haha :p

  25. fidelc123
    December 25th, 2014 at 04:14:06 PM

    Great read so far.
    5/5

    Wonder if this vampire princess will become his waifu <3 ?

  26. Treyon13
    December 25th, 2014 at 07:00:48 PM

    Did you forget that Lilianne is pregnant lol?, Joking aside, Lilianne, she might get jealous. She is seems to be one of the romance subjects.

    Also MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

  27. imaginexbreaker
    December 26th, 2014 at 03:39:13 AM

    haha lol, yeah, Merry Christmas!….I can’t start writing cause of being dragged all around everywhere -_- well, I’ll probably post 2 chapters next week….probably haha

  28. LordCorwin
    February 14th, 2015 at 10:15:33 AM

    Am I the only one, who after seeing the skill [Trap Appraisal] thought, "Now he won’t mistake [Geeve] for a girl"?

    Act now to raise [Trap Appraisal] to Master Lv 10 and never be deceived by a [Trap] again! No more awkward dates for you.



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